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Hyphen Hysteria
Melanie Spiller and Coloratura Consulting
Hyphens seem to cause a lot of distress. One of my clients asks me to look at advertising copy, and I can sure
see why they’re such a problem. Let’s take a little stroll through Hyphenland and see if the whole situation can
be simplified. Here’s the rule:
Place a hyphen when you want to connect two words and make them into one word.
That’s a basic rule. It means that you’d use a hyphen to:
Spell out parts of a number (like forty-five)
Describe something by using an adjective and an adverb with a noun on the end (like store-bought
cookies) or connect words that don’t make sense on their own in context of the rest of the sentence
Attach (or unattach) an otherwise bewildering prefix (as in co-op)
Connect a dangling unfinished word to the rest of it in a document that doesn’t have the luxury of
word wrapping
Numbers pretty much always get hyphens, no matter how they’re used in a sentence (or while writing a check).
Use a hyphen only between the “tens” and the “ones,” so you’d have six hundred twenty-seven daffodils and
three thousand four hundred forty-five dust particles. Notice that there’s no “and” between the hundreds and
the “tens.” If there were, it might not be clear that the spelled-out version is one big number. Most publishing
entities have you use numerals for numbers greater than ten, though, so except for writing a check, you won’t
have much use for this tidbit.
Use a hyphen to make clear the difference between the quantity and the measurement of something if you
would have used a hyphen to describe the thing anyway. If you were going to talk about a four-foot pole, you’d
say 10 four-foot poles or ten 4-foot poles.
There are some words that might one day become a single word but still use hyphens to connect them, like a
merry-go-round, a reporter-at-large, or stand-alone. As you can see from my examples, these are not always
nouns.
Here’s the tricky one: attaching an adjective to another adjective or a noun. A good rule of thumb is to try
“skipping” the second descriptive word to see if it still makes sense. If you can skip that word, you don’t need
a hyphen.
He is a well-rounded person.
He is a well person.
If you skip the word “rounded,” you’re talking about the fellow’s health instead of his education or brilliant
mind. Let’s try it another way:
He is a well rounded-person.
He is a well rounded person.
Both of these sentences mean that he is influenced by a well. In the first one, the well has caused his roundness
and a rounded-person is some specific type of person. In the second example, if you drop the “rounded,”
you’re back to saying that he is a “well person,” which I suppose could mean he’s healthy if you look at the
previous example, or it could mean that he belongs to a secret society of well fanciers. Or maybe that he lives
in a well.
The reason you want a hyphen here is because “well-rounded” is a compound modifier before the noun. The
noun is “person” and the modifying adjective and adverb set is compound because neither word makes a lot of
sense on its own in this context. You really have to link them with a hyphen.
If you move the noun away, you don’t need a hyphen anymore because the adverb and adjective don’t modify
the noun anymore (because you moved it or got rid of it).
The person is well rounded.
He is well rounded.
In this case, there’s no way to separate the words. The person is rounded. How is he rounded? He is rounded
well. There is no way to misinterpret the meaning, so you don’t need the hyphen to link anymore.
There’s one little exception to this rule, and that’s if the adverb ends in “ly.” I did not make this rule, so don’t
yell at me. In my head, an adverb is an adverb, whether it ends in “ly” or not. But there’s this rule anyway.
The teenager was badly-acne scarred.
That’s wrong, for two reasons. One is that you don’t link an “ly” word to a noun or an adjective, and the other
is that “acne” modifies “scarred.” So the sentence should be:
The teenager was badly acne-scarred.
Let’s look at another one.
This is a badly-punctured basketball.
This is a well-loved teddy bear.
In the second sentence, you can see the need for the hyphen—you can’t say “This is a well teddy bear,” after
all. The only thing that makes this usage different from the first one in that pair is the “ly” ending on the word
“bad.” The first sentence doesn’t get a hyphen anywhere.
You also don’t use a hyphen between parts of a proper noun. Where you’d say:
The American economy was affected by last year’s drought.
You’d also say:
The North American economy was affected by last year’s drought.
Even though strictly speaking, “North” modifies “American,” it’s a proper noun, so it doesn’t get a hyphen.
In other news, use a hyphen to separate a prefix from the rest of the word if the vowel is repeated or the
meaning would be obscured. Consider re-elect and reelect, co-op and coop, re-sign and resign, re-form and
reform, re-sent and resent.
Finally, when your document or line of programming doesn’t have the convenience of word wrapping to
spread characters evenly across the page, use a hyphen to separate one syllable from another. That means you
can’t break up monosyllabic words, and that you need to KNOW where the syllables end (“syllable” breaks up
to be syl-la-ble, for instance, right between the Ls). Knowing where to break a word may require a trip to the
dictionary.