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The Sentence Rules, Part 2
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Now that you’ve figured out the basic parts of the sentence, it’s time to work on finesse. Once you identify
the subject of the sentence and the verb, you can mess around with all the elements that modify them.
Options for modifying a noun/verb sentence include adding prepositional or participial phrases or adverbial
clauses, increasing the level of detail with adjectives and participles, and adding optional information offset
by conjunctions and punctuation. There are more toys in this toy box, but I’m trying to keep this particular
blog short. Wish me luck. :-)
Prepositional Phrases
A preposition provides information about when the subject of the sentence happened or provides some other
sort of direction. Prepositions include words like after, before, above, beyond, below, over, under, in, toward,
and because (of). In a prepositional phrase beginning, the rest of the sentence makes complete grammatical
and logical sense by itself: the prepositional phrase only provides useful or interesting details. All
prepositional beginnings must be set off by commas. The British aren’t consistent with this comma thing, but
American English requires it.
You can read more about Prepositional phrases in my earlier blog, Preposition Proposition.”It was published
in April 2004, I believe.
Adjectives
Adjectives provide color; they are the descriptive words that tell us which thing is under discussion by
naming specifics about the subject. You can use an adjective just prior to a noun, or you can use it as if it
were a noun by making it the focus of the predicate. You can read more about adjectives in my recent blog,
Adjective Agitation, published in January 2005.
Participial Phrases
As I covered in two previous blogs (Participle Particulars Parts 1 and 2, published in January 2005),
participles are verbs that act like adjectives. Both adjectives and participles have nouns right near by that
they modify, so you can treat them pretty much the same.
Adverbial Clauses
As you might remember from a previous blog (Home for an Adverb, published in June 2004), adverbs
provide a description of the manner in which something happened. They belong at the end of the sentence,
after the verb/gerund they modify. Occasionally, you’ll find them at the beginning of sentences (like this
one), but try to avoid this construction in your more serious work because it’s controversial.
Conjunctions
Conjunctions link one half of a sentence to the other. They coordinate, joining related or similar words to
each other; they correlate, joining words by acting in pairs (like either/or); and they subordinate, providing
information about what the important parts of the sentence are. You can read more about them in my
scintillating blog called Conjunctions, published in November 2004.
Punctuation
As I’ve lectured, er, blogged many times, punctuation is more than a way to separate one sentence from
another. You can use punctuation to focus the reader’s attention, to isolate essential from non-essential
information, to allow the reader to catch a breath, and to convey excitement or confusion. I have written
loads of blogs on punctuation; surf my website because things are organized by topic there, rather than by
publication date as they are in this blog.
As always, I’ll be happy to answer questions on specific sentences. Your questions give me the best
motivation and topics for writing this blog, and I thank you for your persistence in wading through all this
stuff.